At long last.
Yep, I’ve actually finally decided to stop screwing around and release the second chapter for you to enjoy tomorrow! I wholly promise that the wait for the subsequent chapters will not be this long – I’m going to focus on releasing stuff, not making more drafts.
This next chapter will feature the other two main characters of this narrative: Elroia and an acused “deviant” (named in the next chapter) called “Juie”. I will spoil no more, but let you read for yourself tomorrow. Just need to make some alterations according to peer feedback before it’s palatable.
Oh, and PS:
I had a go at doing my own interpretation of Peter Stout and Verne. Again, use your imagination with the characters – you don’t have to see them the way I do! Juie and Elroia will arrive at a later date.

Verne on the left, Peter the right. Why does Stout have a candle stick? You’ll find out soon!
Tomorrow, y’lot!
(I’m going to keep the NaNoWriMo tag on for now, since this is just me redrafting what I made over november, m’kay?)
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